ΔΕΑΝ vs ΣΑΜ: Little Bang!

September 6, 2008

Alright, sasquatches! It’s about that time… Our first challenge was set last weekend, and we were given a week to complete the task. The fics are DONE! Now let’s see who’s boss…

To anyone not associated with the frat house competitions, each fraternity was given the exact same first 3 paragraphs to work with as a premise for their team’s submission…

He pulls you into the men’s room forcefully, and you take a quick glance around, heart racing, to make sure it’s empty, before you back him up to the counter to take a seat on the edge. Your head starts to spin as he runs a single finger down the length of your jaw before hooking his hand around the back of your head. He lightly pulls your hair, sending your skull jerking backwards, exposing your neck. You let out a sharp gasp as he spells out all the things he’s going to do to you right here in this very room as he bites and mouths small kisses up your neck, coming to a stop right at your lips.

Breathing heavily, you look into those eyes – Jared’s eyes. And that look alone is almost enough to send you over the edge. You feel the heat pool between your legs in a warm rush as his mouth presses ever so gently to yours. You can’t help the sound that escapes your lips as his tongue circles yours hungrily. In a matter of moments, you’re lost in your own little world. Your brain slips just slightly back into consciousness when you think you hear the door open and close – the faintest sound of a deadbolt lock clicking into place. You come crashing back to reality when you sense a presence behind you, but your eyes never open. Your mouth never leaves Jared’s.

Then you feel him, and all sense of panic is gone in an instant. His hands on your waist, the bulge in his pants pressing firmly against your ass, his chest rising and falling against your back, and you know, know that this is right. That this is exactly where you’re supposed to be, right here between these two best friends – wrapped up in Jensen and Jared.

From there, each team was given a very specific set of instructions to complete the fic. Team Ackles was to take the fic in a direction that proves that Jensen Ackles is the toppiest!top to ever TOP!  Likewise, Team Padalecki set out to prove that Jared Padalecki is the toppiest!top to ever TOP! Well, now it’s time for you to decide whose fic made their point in the most proper, smutterific fashion.

Plz to be reading each fic, and voting in a comment…DO IT NAO!!!

ΔΕΑΝ’S Submission:

ΣΑΜ’S Submission:

*kickin’ ass and takin’ names, biotch*

43 Responses to “ΔΕΑΝ vs ΣΑΜ: Little Bang!”

  1. M-Tizzle Says:

    I vote Sam. STFU.

  2. A-Jizzle Says:

    I vote Sam, as well.

    GOD DAMN, I want in on that sandwich. No bullshit.

    Excellent work all around, ladies. Well done! ;)

  3. Chelle Says:

    I vote DEAN. Straight to the point with not alot of talking.

  4. Bel Says:

    Don’t want to seem like a not-fair player, but I vote SAM as well. It’s just a hotter story.

    Must say, it’s good someone made the style more consistent, because at one point we had two very different stories going on, not just in style but also in, ahum, mood. Direction maybe? :)

    Girls, you’ve made me want to write more smuttish fanfiction.

  5. Bel Says:

    Must concur though, DEAN stuck to the assignment more, their DEAN is the boss and Jared just has to sit back and behave. In our fic, the two are collaborators. So if that’s the criterium that’s most important…

  6. M-Tizzle Says:

    Lol why are we even voting, when our POV’s clearly don’t matter. An alternative adjudicator is gonna judge. Stay tuned…

  7. Melanthia Says:

    I vote SAM, not because I’m a member of that frat but because I think it’s hoter that they work together. I’m not really a fan of dominant Jensen.

  8. A-Jizzle Says:

    I dunno guys…yeah, Jensen made Jared sit on the sidelines and STFU, while he got his way.

    However, I think Jared’s toppiness was subtly stated, yet perfectly executed. It wasn’t too “in your face” but you KNEW.

    …besides, nothing turns me on more than Jensen coming on command. Nnnnnnnnggghhh!!!!

  9. Jedi Says:

    Shit, its going to be tough to be unbiassed in declaring a winner.

    J2 all over ya, HOT HOT HOT.

    BUT…. JenSIN taking charge – TOPS in my books.

    I guess we’ll have to let the student body decide this one?

  10. jensens_fuckbuddy Says:

    I VOTE SAM, AND YEA I KNOW IM TEAM DEAN BUT I DONT LIKE OUR STORY ONE BIT………….. SAMS WAS BETTER.

  11. Liz Says:

    I vote SAM. I thought our story was way hotter.

    I did enjoy reading DEANS tho. Well done ladies.

  12. superwicked Says:

    I vote DEAN!

    I prefer shorter to the point, the sex was damn hot in Sam’s story, but it was just the rest was just too long for my taste!
    ;)

  13. superwicked Says:

    and I type like shit, xcuse my grammar above!

  14. Nicole Says:

    I Vote Dean !!!!! Delta Epsilon Alphu Nu !!!!!!!! ( not just cuz i’m in team ackles, but I really thought that the story was Hot- like fire !!!! ) p.s. Sam’s story was hot hot hot too, I really liked that story alot, it was hard for me to pick one. :)

  15. sophie pie Says:

    ‘SCUSE ME.

    BUT THIS SHIT ABOUT TEAMWORK IN THE SAM STORY? TOTALLY PROVES THAT JARED IS THE TOPPIEST TOP EVAR TO TOP.

    DID SOMEONE MISS THE FACT THAT JENSEN ONLY DID EXACTLY WHAT JARED ALLOWED HIM TO DO???? BTW, I CAPSLOCK BECAUSE I CARE.

    AND THAT SAID TEAMWORK MADE THE ABSOLUTE HOTTEST, MOST AWESOME, MOST EPIC SEX FOR ALL THREE INVOLVED? WHICH AGAIN – WASN’T THIS THE POINT, AND SHOWS JARED’S TOTAL, COMPLETE MASTERY OF SEX? THANKS TO MASTER JARED’S PREVIOUS SCHOOLING OF HIS COMMANDER JENSEN, NOT ONLY DID THE CENTRAL CHARACTER, BUT ALL OF US HAD MULTIPLE O’S OUT OF THIS STORY.

    A REAL MAN MAKES A WOMAN COME LIKE A FREIGHT TRAIN. THAT’S WHAT I’M TALKIN’ BOUT.

    THE END.

    Ahem – as you were.

    Erm, not that anyone’s counting my vote, but since you’re all weighing in, I totally vote for SAM. Yeah.

    La, Sophie Pie.

  16. LaneyLou Says:

    DEAN…. The end… oh and bite me….

  17. Kris Says:

    I vote DEAN too even tho I’m a SAM girl cuz someone from my house fucked up the story in making the final version.
    What everyone read is NOT what was written.

  18. M-Tizzle Says:

    Excuse me whilst i sit here LMAO at all the dramz. Y’all are hilurrious fangirls.

    JFB if it will make you feel better, post your stuff here so we can read.

    And Kris, what did i miss? *shrug*

  19. M-Tizzle Says:

    Oh, wait, i know!

    ENORMOUS WANG!!!

  20. Kris Says:

    Dude. Compare Maichan’s comment version and what’s posted as the final version.
    Lame-ass version is lame-ass.

  21. sophie pie Says:

    Excuse me. Maichan did not do final beta. It was sent to me, and I made the changes you apparently do not like.

    If everyone doesn’t like them, then please back up and remove that version and post one that everyone agrees with.

    btw – I didn’t see that you were writing, Kris. Unless it was under another user name?

  22. sophie pie Says:

    MAICHAN – YOUR PEENDANCE IS ON ITS WAY TO BEING SERVED.

    ENORMOUS WANG X 17. YIS!

  23. Liz Says:

    Sophie, It rocked! Our story was immense.

    I don’t see the problem that a few small things were changed. Everyone who put the effort in is happy with it :)

  24. sophie pie Says:

    Are they? I hope so. *cringes*

    I CAN DO MOAR PEENDANCE IF ANYONE REALLY HATES SOMETHING ABOUT IT but overall likes the rest. *bends over*

  25. A-Jizzle Says:

    The final changes that were made were necessary to the story. Nothing, storywise, was actually changed. Certain bits of dialogue were updated to improve the overall continuity and cohesiveness of the style we ended up going with. As far as I know, Maichan had no issues with the changes that were made to the final beta’d version, nor do any of the rest of us have issues with it.

    So, no worries, S. I, too, agree that the final final version rocked. And many thanks to you, M, and BL for taking the time to beta. You girls are the bomb diggity, yo!

    *Stamps a gold Padapeen in the middle of all 3 of your foreheads*

  26. Mink Says:

    Okay, so FIRST of all, I would like to say that Maichan totally sucker punched me in obtaining my agreement to read these stories, because she omitted to mention THE HET FACTOR!!!

    To be clear for future reference, girls in my porn make me go, “Ewww!” As a rule I only read ‘man on man’ action that is totally female-free.

    *ahem*

    However, because I love you both, I gritted my teeth and struggled through.

    So, on to the ‘judging’.

    Whoever wrote, betaed and pulled the stories together to form cohesive wholes did a good job. Both are well written and blissfully almost entirely free of typos.

    I will have to admit, however, that the Dean story was a little vanilla for my taste, and the almost total absence of Sam from the action didn’t work in its favour IMO.

    The Sam story had some nice edge: a hint of danger and forcefulness, some roughness, and of course some very decisive sharing. Overall the Sam story was considerably dirtier, the action hotter, and therefore my vote goes to ‘Master and Commander’.

    Nice work, all! Keep it up! ;)

  27. Bel Says:

    Hi, before this thing explodes, I was the cause (although I didn’t want to say anything), I e-mailed Sophie about it and no, I do not want the final version to be changed.

    The end result is good and we had fun doing it!

  28. sonovabitch Says:

    I KNEW SAM WOULD WIN… WELL DONE YOU DESERVED IT TO BE FAIR OURS SUCKED IN MY OPINION I HATED IT BEING SENT IN WITH ALL THE SEXX AND DIRTY STUFF CUT OUT.

    WORTHY WINNER IN SAM!!!!!!

    BUT YES I AM BITTER ABOUT HOW OURS WAS ORGANISED AND RUN!

  29. Liz Says:

    YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

    Was there ever any doubt?

    *Smugface*

    Awww we did it SAM.

    We rule !!

    I LOVE YOU SIGMA :)

    Bring on the next challenge…

  30. Liz Says:

    Hang on, Mink was the judge right?

    Otherwise I’ma look like a right twat…

  31. sophie pie Says:

    ILU ALL.

    I uploaded a .pdf of Master and Commander here, if anyone would like to grab it and take it home to fap with.
    http://sophiebriand.com/pdfs/Master%20and%20Commander.pdf

    Love, sophie

  32. Patty Says:

    Is it me or are people who didn’t write bitching loudest? I liked both, one better than the other but I know that editing is not easy especially with a zillion contributors and a very short amount of time.

    Great job to the editors and to all the people that contributed.

  33. sonovabitch Says:

    well i wrote loads but it was not included

  34. PurePoiisonn Says:

    My frat is gonna hate me:/

    I vote Sam.

    *ducks*

    It was written more gooder though…
    It was:/

  35. ~Nightshade~ Says:

    Patty, I concur. Everyone did a great job. EVERY! ONE! Chillax y’all.

  36. superwicked Says:

    Congrats to SAM!

  37. sophie pie Says:

    I WROTE PEENDANCE FOR MT AND MAICHAN AND ALSO FOR ANYONE ELSE WHO WAS DISTURBED IN ANY WAY BY ANYTHING AT ALL TODAY OR AT ANY TIME IN THE PAST OR FUTURE.

    PORN CURES ALL, LOVIES.

    SO HAVE SOME FREE PORN, HERE:

    “CRAZY, NC17, JARED/JENSEN, 2800 WORDS”
    http://sophiebriand.com/wordpress/?page_id=85

  38. superwicked Says:

    So what does the winners get?

  39. Laura Says:

    I didnt read either…Yes, im bad. TELL you’ve see the Redbull thingy? EPIC LULZ with Jensens cartoon driving, and Jareds kindaepiclygay sunnies.
    LOVE.

  40. Liz Says:

    Sophie….ILY and I LOVE your porn bb.

    Laura: What is this?! ^^ Need to see!!

  41. M-Tizzle Says:

    Lol, taking it upon yourselves to blog, hmm? Unpatient bitchez are unpatient. Pfft

  42. Bel Says:

    I think we should get a prize. What about some free pornz story where Jared shows Jensen who’s boss exactly? Written by DEAN of course ;)


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